Introduction to a Paradise

The piece you are about to read is a journal I was assigned to do. It is from mid quarter and is a descriptive piece. I chose it because out of all my descriptive papers it is by far the best one in the science that it shows you the reader the place, without telling. I don’t say where something is but I describe what is around it and you end up getting the picture. I believe it shows my strength to visualize a place then write about it. I personal have never seen a place like this so I thought I did well to describe it. For example, "As the day came to an end the setting sun turned a stunning pink; the magical view took my breath away."